Your portfolio looks very nice and it is well organized. You did a good job expressing your thoughts through writing which made me try to imagine what was actually happening, and even thought I actually smelled burning garlic. You showed improvement in your writing but there are still grammar and spelling errors.
Hi Tassja,
ReplyDeleteYour portfolio looks very nice and it is well organized. You did a good job expressing your thoughts through writing which made me try to imagine what was actually happening, and even thought I actually smelled burning garlic. You showed improvement in your writing but there are still grammar and spelling errors.
Keep up the good work and continue to persevere.
Love,
Dad