I am sweet like a box of chocolate
a truffle, with a hard chocolate shell on the outside
but have a smooth, creamy inside that is true and pure
a box that is filled with many surprises
i'm very unique and have my own special flavors
each with a different taste that will surely satisfy you
different creamy fruit fillings and caramel
that savor and compliment the chocolates flavor
the center that make you eyes wide open wide
fluffy and smooth, you be sad when it's gone
I am a persons Best Friend that is always there for you
always comforting you when times are very rough
and will always put a big smile on your face
a treat that is enjoyed by anyone
Its good but I think you should talk more about yourself than fruit filled chocolate
ReplyDeleteWhen I first read it, I really liked it! :D It's very well written and I like that you use assorted chocolate to describe the different things about you. Comparing yourself to a box of chocolate was very creative and new. Very cool! The only thing wrong with your poem is some grammar errors. But very good overall! :)
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