Teen Anxiety is also know as having stress. It can be a good thing because I can help you deal with a tight situation but can be dangerous if people don't know how to handle it. Anxiety can being nervous to go to school or being anxious of making new friends. it is sometime caused by the lack of assurance and parents not being a good influence or feeling the expectations are too high to reach. The reason why teen Anxiety is a risky business for teens is because it can have big impact on their lives.
Teens will fill it from time to time because it is natural. They can feel sick and have symptoms like rapid heart rate, sweating, headaches, sweating, and trembling. If some has a panic attack its uncomfortable but it is not dangerous of life threating or dangerous. there is the ABC's for anxiety : physically - what we feel in our body; mentally - what goes through our mind like worrisome thoughts; behaviorally - what we do or our actions, such as avoid or seek-reassurance. A way to avoid it is by forming a habit and having patience with your child. The important thing is to encourage them and help them face their fears. (http://www.anxietybc.com/parent/index.php) parenting is not easy because you have to juggle between work, bills, and taking care of your children. Parents cant always give them the attention they need but the important thing if s being a good role model. for Example: If the parents drink and smoke and the child watches them he can be influenced to do it in the future. (http://www.drrobynsilverman.com/body-image/being-a-positive-role-model-seven-ways-to-make-an-impact/)
Parents are the most influential person in a child's life and can have a big impact. some parents don't know but Teen's don't really tell their parents anything. It is sometimes hard to trust teens as much as trusting your parents. This can be serious if they are depressed and they don't tell an adult. Anxiety can be serious because it can be like your child refusing to eat or go to school. All parents have expectations for their children which is important but sometimes I can be a little too much for some kids to handle. For example if that child has a older sibling and does great in school and is an athlete, the parents would compare them to the sibling but I depends on how their parents are like. (http://www.childtrends.org/?indicators=parental-expectations-for-their-childrens-academic-attainment). it has a strong effect on teens is because it gives them the motivation. feeling that they cant live up to their parents expectations can lead to anxiety or discouragement. it is good to teach your teen self-discipline as well as rewarding them for goo behavior. another thing is encouraging them when they need it like in academics. (http://everydaylife.globalpost.com/effects-parental-expectations-kids-4183.html)
I noticed how there are spelling, punctuation, and grammatical errors throughout your draft which led me to re-reading the sentences every so often. I found it confusing, in your first paragraph you change from topic to topic quickly and it's difficult to follow. There are no transitions between examples, organization is also missing. The topic is teen anxiety but you're examples are irrelevant, I'm reading about parental expectations and how a child can be depressed instead of learning that anxiety is the real problem.
ReplyDeleteFirst off essay is incomplete, it needs to be five paragraphs and there are only three. Please read over essay there is high amounts of word use error, spelling error, and missing words. I agree with the other comment there is not organization in the essay, no real transitions and it gets confusing. Your essay starts off with anxiety but then starts to talk about parent influence and then depression, how do these things relate to anxiety? you need to clarify. After reading your essay I have no idea what your purpose(subtopic) is for the essay and why you are writing it. please spend more time on the final. AS(1+)
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